Last week kakapo made confession poems about what we have done.
We had to draft it before we edited it and then published it on our slid . Then we had to pick a photo for our poem that will fit the poem.
It was made from William carols William and senator.
And now here is my confession poem.
Dat one tasty cookie
ReplyDeleteHi William, William and Senator,
ReplyDeleteI really love this post and love how you made your work funny and attracting at the same time. I love the way that you incorporated the amazing language in your piece of writing; Overall this poem was amazing, but a tip for next time I would say that you could remove the black highlight on the background, as it may be a bit distracting.
I find this poem utterly amazing and hilarious, I am getting quite hungry looking at that appetizing cookie. I really like the inticing language that you've used to explain how you ate the cookie; I also love the idea of a Confession poem and might hand the idea onto my peers and classmates.
Thanks for the amazing idea and congrats on the amazing writing Piece.
Carter.
Thank you's.
DeleteHello i'm Harley from Paroa School this is a pretty good poem I like that it's about a cookie who would of guessed that. My advice for next time is to mabye not have the black in the back of the text and just have some black text and it would be a bit better to read.
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